Born in a small town in Ohio named Lorain,
Sometimes it gives me pain or makes me insane,
But this is one of the small things that makes my emotional figure.
I am from a small family that cares very much,
Surrounded by friends who encourage me and such,
We play football, video games, and ball in on the courts,
And what makes it fun is that we are all good sports,
I am from the things that I do and say,
The actions may seem small today,
But may become bigger at a later date,
So I be cautious because sooner or later it will be fate.
I am from many small things that makes something bigger,
Its what pulled the trigger,
Its what pulled the trigger,
it made me special and unique,
and have my own life and chic.
Very nice, I loved your idiom. It's what pulled the trigger. Wonder where you got that from?
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DeleteI thought it was great and I really like how you rhymed in the poem.
ReplyDeleteI like your rhyme scheme. When you rhyme the first and last line, and then rhyme the 2 middle lines
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem. One part I could rally relate to was, "Sometimes it gives me pain or makes me insane". Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really loved your poem! I especially loved "it made me special and unique, and have my eon life and chic." I don't know why! It just seemed like it clicked.
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ReplyDeleteI think it was cool that you highlighted the word "small" because I would not have picked up on that if you didn't.
I like how you said small a lot. Even though things are small it doesn't mean it's not big to you
ReplyDeleteWhen you said "I am from many small things that makes something bigger, Its what pulled the trigger" I thought that was an amazing line. I like your use of words.
ReplyDeleteI really like your use of repetition. Good poem.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said you are from small things that makes something bigger. Like what made you is also what makes you who you are now. Your past is the building blocks given to you but you can decide what they make.
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